DRAFT of double page spread

This is my double page spread. Originally this wasn't how this page was presented but then I had to bare in mind the crease down the middle. It worries me how this page contains so much information and how the main image is very small but I personally think it is original. The ripped boxes give it the informal look, and I have edited the image in order to make it look more dramatic.

Improvements
In order to improve my double page spread I need to either cut down the text or make it smaller. I also need to make the image a lot bigger, as on most music magazines the image takes up at least half of the page.